From	Eystein Jansen	Date	Tue, 11 Jan 2005 11:57:13 +0100
To	Valerie Masson-Delmotte, masson@dsm-mail.saclay.cea.fr
CC	Jonathan T. Overpeck, Jean-Claude Duplessy, Dominique Raynaud, cddhr@giss.nasa.gov, Stefan Rahmstorf, dolago@uonbi.ac.ke, Keith Briffa, Fortunat Joos
Subject	Re: Urgent - pls respond FAST
Valerie, Thanks for putting together the chaper so well. I think it is quite comprehensive now. I have made a few changes in the enclosed document and also added a comment( pops up if you mark the yellow field). I tend to like the questions, and think it highlights the relevance elements of the chapter. The missing references I have suggested, we can take care of in the final editorial process from our side. As for figures one figure showing the evidence for Holocene warrmt and the abrupt character of the 5-4ka cooling, perhaps with a low latitude data set that shows another evolution would be good to have, as you indicate, but we cannot bombard the chapter with wiggly lines, so the most characteristic exampes would be best. If you need high lat.ocean data I can provide, or perhaps NorthGrip O-18 is best? Cheers, Eystein Cheers, Eystein At 11:13 +0100 11-01-05, Valerie Masson-Delmotte wrote: >Valerie Masson-Delmotte wrote: > >>I tried the question style for the Holocene >>section... Any feedback would be appreciated >>together with missing references (Fortunat). >>Valerie. >> >>Jonathan Overpeck wrote: >> >>>Hi all leads and seconds of our Chap 6.5 >>>Synthesis sections. Fortunat came up with a >>>interesting way to highlight what's important >>>and why in his section 6.5.3, and Eystein and >>>I would like feedback from you - particularly >>>the leads - on whether this approach would >>>work for each of your subsections. >>> >>>He used a question and answer style. If people >>>do not like this then the question at the >>>beginning of the paragraphs can of course be >>>easily dropped and replaced by a statement. >>>BUT, what do you say about using this >>>convention throughout 6.5??? Note that some >>>sections might have much more text per unit >>>question. >>> >>>Please respond asap. Thanks, Peck and Eystein >> >> >> > > > >Attachment converted: Sauvignon blanc:Holocene-VMD3.doc (WDBN/MSWD) (004575F7) >Attachment converted: Sauvignon blanc:masson 8.vcf (TEXT/ttxt) (004575F8) -- ______________________________________________________________ Eystein Jansen Professor/Director Bjerknes Centre for Climate Research and Dep. of Earth Science, Univ. of Bergen Allégaten 55 N-5007 Bergen NORWAY e-mail: eystein.jansen@geo.uib.no Phone: +47-55-583491 - Home: +47-55-910661 Fax: +47-55-584330 ----------------------- The Bjerknes Training site offers 3-12 months fellowships to PhD students More info at: www.bjerknes.uib.no/mcts ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Attachment Converted: "c:\eudora\attach\Holocene-VMD3_ej_com.doc"