From	Tim Osborn	Date	Fri Sep 15 12:01:00 2006
To	Øyvind Paasche
CC	Keith Briffa, Eystein Jansen, Jonathan T. Overpeck
Subject	Re: Final checks on figures and captions Email 1 of 2
Hi Oyvind, I was off work yesterday so I couldn't check the tables until today. Keith and I have spotted some corrections that need to be made, some my mistakes and some due to other changes. Sorry! Anyway all are shown as tracked changes (plus explanation comments) in the attached file. Hope this is all clear and ok. Cheers Tim At 17:02 13/09/2006, Øyvind Paasche wrote: tim - that's very good, the minor error in box fig.1 is now corrected. I think the lines in fig.6.10 and 6.14 are sufficiently thick so if its up to me we'll leave them as they are. I believe that all the figures are incorporated into the Word file the same way and I can't see any big difference between 6.10 and 6.14. TSU have eps formats of all the figures and in the end they will probably use an entirely different program than Word to construct the report, so I guess there's nothing to worry about. Anyway, I have cleaned the standing version of the tables (attached) and if you (and/or Keith) could go through them a last time and check that everything is as it should be that would be nice. I have one question concerning one of the refs in table 6.2: Does Bertrand et al., 2002b correspond to Bertrand, C., M.F. Loutre, M. Crucifix, and A. Berger, 2002b: Climate of the last millennium: a sensitivity study. Tellus Series a-Dynamic Meteorology and Oceanography, 54(3), 221-244. Cheers, Øyvind Hi, I've checked that the figures and captions are the final versions and they are all correct for figures 6.10-6.14. I've also checked Box 6.4, Figure 1 and here there is an error with the caption. The caption ends with the reference period which currently states '...the period 800-1995." I got this wrong. The correct statement is "...the period 1001-1980." Sorry about that (it was a mistake carried over from our earlier use of the figure from Osborn and Briffa, 2006, Science: for that paper we did use 800-1995). Were you also after a check of the image quality? The figures I'm involved with all look pretty good, except that 6.10 is a bit blurry or lower quality. Was it inserted into Word in a different way to the others that might have degraded the image? Also, I wonder whether I should make the lines on Figure 6.10(b) and/or Figure 6.14(b) any thicker? Please let me know if you want me to do this. Cheers Tim At 01:46 13/09/2006, Jonathan Overpeck wrote: Hi all - We're editing main text, and we think we're close to the right length without having to make significant cuts beyond what you've seen already - it's mostly down to editing for consistent style and clarity. That's good news. Øyvind recently sent (working very late over their) the attached figs and caption files (being sent in two files to keep each half under 10 Mb), and rather than Peck trying to figure out if it's all perfect, we're sending to YOU look at your figures and captions to make sure they are the most up-to-date versions. Thanks! It's a challenge to make sure we have all the most recent pieces, although we're betting that we're doing ok. Tomorrow (I hope - thanks Øyvind!) we'll send tables - hoping Tim, Keith, and Fortunat will be waiting to comment/edit if needed. We're in much better shape than last cycles thanks to all your hard work - hope we can make this last bit easy for you. We appreciate you working fast when we send material. Thanks, Peck and Eystein -- Jonathan T. Overpeck Director, Institute for the Study of Planet Earth Professor, Department of Geosciences Professor, Department of Atmospheric Sciences Mail and Fedex Address: Institute for the Study of Planet Earth 715 N. Park Ave. 2nd Floor University of Arizona Tucson, AZ 85721 direct tel: +1 520 622-9065 fax: +1 520 792-8795 [1]http://www.geo.arizona.edu/ [2]http://www.ispe.arizona.edu/ Dr Timothy J Osborn, Academic Fellow Climatic Research Unit School of Environmental Sciences, University of East Anglia Norwich NR4 7TJ, UK e-mail: t.osborn@uea.ac.uk phone: +44 1603 592089 fax: +44 1603 507784 web: [3]http://www.cru.uea.ac.uk/~timo/ sunclock: [4]http://www.cru.uea.ac.uk/~timo/sunclock.htm **Norwich -- City for Science: **Hosting the BA Festival 2-9 September 2006 -- Dr. Øyvind Paasche Bjerknes Centre for Climate Research/ Department of Earth Science University of Bergen Allé gt. 55 N-5007, Bergen Norway Phone direct: +47 55583297 Cell phone: +47 93048919 E-mail: oyvind.paasche@bjerknes.uib.no References 1. http://www.geo.arizona.edu/ 2. http://www.ispe.arizona.edu/ 3. http://www.cru.uea.ac.uk/~timo/ 4. http://www.cru.uea.ac.uk/~timo/sunclock.htm