From	Phil Jones	Date	Thu Oct 1 10:56:44 2009
To	Michael E. Mann, Tim Osborn, Malcolm K. Hughes
CC	Gavin Schmidt
Subject	Re: draft of Yamal RealClimate post
Mike, Gavin, Here are a few important mods to your piece. Don't mention Keith has been off ill. Remove the bit about provenance and about access to more data. We'll go into the latter in the longer bit next week. We'll send the piece we're putting up later - or give you the link. Rest of your piece is great - especially the bit on how science should be done. Keith has also picked up in the bit we'll post that McIntyre has put in the caveats but lets others say the outrageous things in comments or on other blogs. Cheers Phil At 03:42 01/10/2009, Michael Mann wrote: Dear Tim, Phil, Malcolm, I've enclosed a draft of our article, which we'd like to go online w/ tomorrow (attached as a word file--unfortunately this distorts the post relative to the way it will actually look on the website, but it was the easiest way to send w/ hyperlinks and figures intact). Please let us know if there is anything that you think is either erroneous, unclear, etc. in the piece. we'll link to whatever CRU puts up tomorrow as soon as a link is available. thanks in advance for your help, mike -- Michael E. Mann Professor Director, Earth System Science Center (ESSC) Department of Meteorology Phone: (814) 863-4075 503 Walker Building FAX: (814) 865-3663 The Pennsylvania State University email: mann@psu.edu University Park, PA 16802-5013 website: [1]http://www.meteo.psu.edu/~mann/Mann/index.html "Dire Predictions" book site: [2]http://www.essc.psu.edu/essc_web/news/DirePredictions/index.html Dear Tim, Phil, Malcolm, I've enclosed a draft of our article, which we'd like to go online w/ tomorrow (attached as a word file--unfortunately this distorts the post relative to the way it will actually look on the website, but it was the easiest way to send w/ hyperlinks and figures intact). Please let us know if there is anything that you think is either erroneous, unclear, etc. in the piece. we'll link to whatever CRU puts up tomorrow as soon as a link is available. thanks in advance for your help, mike -- Michael E. Mann Professor Director, Earth System Science Center (ESSC) Department of Meteorology Phone: (814) 863-4075 503 Walker Building FAX: (814) 865-3663 The Pennsylvania State University email: [3]mann@psu.edu University Park, PA 16802-5013 website: [4]http://www.meteo.psu.edu/~mann/Mann/index.html "Dire Predictions" book site: [5]http://www.essc.psu.edu/essc_web/news/DirePredictions/index.html Prof. Phil Jones Climatic Research Unit Telephone +44 (0) 1603 592090 School of Environmental Sciences Fax +44 (0) 1603 507784 University of East Anglia Norwich Email p.jones@uea.ac.uk NR4 7TJ UK ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- References 1. http://www.meteo.psu.edu/~mann/Mann/index.html 2. http://www.essc.psu.edu/essc_web/news/DirePredictions/index.html 3. mailto:mann@psu.edu 4. http://www.meteo.psu.edu/~mann/Mann/index.html 5. http://www.essc.psu.edu/essc_web/news/DirePredictions/index.html